ooowwww, my shoulder hurts...damn mouse!i wish i had a tablet or a personel massager...i think ill chose the personal-wait!*shakes head*back to business!right, um, oh yea, the kyuubi looks like he's gonna make a deal with naruto..will naruto accept what it will be?

lol, i think i made Kyuubi look to fluffy...LOL

oh yea, i KNOW that naruto has completly lost his mind during 4 tails time, but i just want everyone to know his inner thoughts while this is happening.anyway, by hearing about jiraiya's death, im pretty sure it seems his mind's already shattered.he knows he should'nt believe this mysterious Akatsuki guy...but something tells him its true.

oh yea,this is my first time drawing people in a position/altitude like that....so..yea, it kinda sucks, but i was mildly impressed with myself that it was the 1st time, and i was satisfied with it.

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